Peer Review :]

In Wednesdays class session, I walked into class with pure excitement. I was going to be allowed to really interact with my group in class, but also get a nice critique and peer edit from my group and peers. With my experience from prior English class at Grossmont College, I was very eager to start spreading my ideas for this essay.

When we started circulating the papers among our groups, I started to develop many ideas to how I better my essay, even from the first sentences of my peer's essays. with diversity among essays, it opens my eyes to different perspectives that people can view the same essay. So now that I have given and received ways to improve my essay, not just me, but my class will take the advantage of manifesting our premature ideas to more  concrete and specific essays. To get our papers from the "Kindergarten" stage to maturing them to college level  requires work and a open mind. Thing is, as a Bayan Scholar, I'm starting to see how not only can I use myself a resource for success but the people around me, the community around me, and all the opportunities that open up around me. Cheers to Peer Review !!!!